I suddenly realized that I had lost Ramon somewhere in the pages. The reader has to be able to see the street, see the conveyances; he has to smell the smoke from the factories or the sewage in the gutter.
Historical fiction has a niche, and a huge potential market. Journals kept in the past were, of course, written by literate people with the leisure for self-contemplation.
Or ditch Wonder Cave. Rather than dump all of your research into your manuscript, use it and bend it to fit your narrative. One other point, for commercial novelists especially, is that you do need to be careful about the attitudes of your characters. But to succeed you have to somehow do both.
It was those observations — the small daily details — that I most needed to build a believable historical setting inside fiction. Hit the books: research, research, research When I started my research I found a wealth of marvellous books in English, full of detailed descriptions of this jewel box of a country.
The clouds below stand by and dissipate. Unfortunately, the internet is also full of flawed information, lies, plagiarized material and half truths.
Insert Historical Treasures in a Meaningful Way Next, you must insert these historical treasures into your novel in a meaningful way. The operative word here is patience.
And what if a wheel breaks, and you have to fix it, and you cut yourself with a rusty tool -- how do you disinfect the cut?